REVISION--
This page (or series of pages and subpages) is for the discussion of final revisions. It should display the frevisions of your work and the last time I saw. This is where you will display, for example, the literacy narrative draft submitted to me with the feedback and then the revised version that shows what you worked on.
When discussing revision choices, be specific. it's important to make sure that you are not discussing general changes made, but that you can reference or quote specific changes made and explain why you made that change. For instance, how did it make the writing better, how did it work toward improvement in your writing, or how did it work toward mastery of an assignment goal or requirement?
Here are some ideas for other things you might cover in this section:
1) Changes made based on feedback
2) Changes you've made based on self-evaluation
3) Which was your most important work and why
4) What you would continue to work on with more time
5) Where you put in particular effort or took particular risks
This page (or series of pages and subpages) is for the discussion of final revisions. It should display the frevisions of your work and the last time I saw. This is where you will display, for example, the literacy narrative draft submitted to me with the feedback and then the revised version that shows what you worked on.
When discussing revision choices, be specific. it's important to make sure that you are not discussing general changes made, but that you can reference or quote specific changes made and explain why you made that change. For instance, how did it make the writing better, how did it work toward improvement in your writing, or how did it work toward mastery of an assignment goal or requirement?
Here are some ideas for other things you might cover in this section:
1) Changes made based on feedback
2) Changes you've made based on self-evaluation
3) Which was your most important work and why
4) What you would continue to work on with more time
5) Where you put in particular effort or took particular risks